English Results

 

Class: ENGLISH Sem 2C

Essay on City of the Beasts Result

Grade: A

Comments: A very well organized essay which addresses the meaning and intention of the question. Good argument and choice of discussion points. Effective use of evidence from the text to support your argument. You engage my interest and thoughts. A strong finish.

Multimodal Task re Ski Trip or Work Experience

Grade: A

Comments: An interesting recount - sometimes humorous and at others, serious. You take the reader - me - with you on this journey through the libraries and what you witness there. You do need to edit better - you must try to read work out loud to ensure that it 'sounds right'. 

Task: Term 3 Independent Reading Response Due: 8/09/2016

Grade: A

Comments: Comprehensive analysis and evaluation of ideas and techniques in the novel. You use evidence effectively to explain and defend your interpretation. You present a perceptive understanding of ideas in the book. 

Task: Persuasive Writing

Teacher:              Christine BOURLIOUFAS               Due:      22/09/2016                           

Assessed:            Graded                                                   

Status:  Results have been published                                                        

My Work:            Essay on Using Less Technology.pdf                                                       

Grade:  A                               

Comments: A well organized and engaging paper. You use a variety of techniques to convince readers of the value of the benefits of reducing the use of technology in educational settings. Use active voice and add anecdotes. A-

Task: Film study

Teacher: Christine BOURLIOUFAS Due: 16/11/2016

Assessed: Graded

Status: Results have been published

My Work:  FILM REVIEW GILBERT GRAPE 2.pdf

Grade: A

Comments: One of the very best reviews, Noah. You write in excellent style, using a wide range of techniques to convince readers of the worth of the film.

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